Hahaha!
I really liked this a lot... Theres a lot you could do to improve but i still really enjoyed it... I thought it was really funny and pretty well made... I think you could have added a background, made it a bit longer, and maybe changed the music... The thing i had the biggest problem with was the writing, i hate when it looks that way... Oh well, nice job, i honestly hope you make another...
Cheers!
~LamboFactor